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Duncan Dissolved Chapter 1

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Duncan was often near his Apple tree. He did his meatation there. He had just returned from Training With the fire monks in Akuta of Zencro Range . Those Monks had Unlimited knowledge of how to use Fire and how to controll Fire. He had spent His early Childhood and his teenager hood there. He was meditating underneath his tree when he heard about whisper.

"A Grey with Ninja now... I thought that to be a deadly downfall" He said to himself getting up and walking from the tree he placed his Chinese Straw hat on and walked to find this grey. Now as seeing Duncan had Left the Dissolve's recently he had to be careful where he walked and not get caught. Unforuntally. The Grey Duncan was looking for found him and Got him arrested. Duncan sat in his cell Medatating and Humming a Tune that the Fire Monks knew. They were dead after a Barberian Attack. Soon Duncan was let out and he saw Two Ninja's outside. Duncan was confused be on all hell. But one ninja attacked the other one and tried to kill him. Duncan Rushed in with his Greenstone Katana and fought the rouge. However Duncan was not as strong as People fought and he lost to the  rought after he stabbed in his knee and left leg. But he wasn't able to help the other ninja when the Grey arrived. The Grey Saw both of them wounded and helped the one who was baddly wounded. Duncan Managed to stand and limp to the Infermary helping to carry the wounded Ninja on his shoulder while the Grey made the way clear. Duncan's blood turned his armor into a Darker red


soon both were but in an operation and both put to sleep for it.

Duncan then heard a whisper

"Thank you" that whisper said
Duncan's Story on Ninja the Famed Dissolved Leader


Ninja (c) :iconhalo-yokoshima:
Whisper (c) :iconsierra-wolf:
Duncan (c) Me
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Nice, but...
I though the ninjas sanctum was impossible to breach unless the ninja gave an individual once in a lifetime instructions.
Also, NOBODY is able to meet the ninja THAT easily. ESPECIALLY when he's inside his sanctum. The ninja prevents people from meeting him unless he wills it, and...
... I don't think he made it possible for (Duncan?) to meet the ninja on such easy terms,so technically this story isn't entirely accurate to the combat dissolved plot line.
unless... did I miss a secret meeting between you and yoko?

dont get me wrong!
i loved this story... It just wasn't accurate I think...
and I couldn't help but feel that you were copying the ninjas backstory just a little...